Monday, December 6, 2010

Exra Credit 5 Part Paragraph new and improved

Writing the 5 part paragraph has been so much easier for me since it was explained in such detail the first time around. I felt that I could have improved on my last 5 part paragraph so I went ahead and improved on the elements needed to be changed. The elements I had struggled with last time were putting quotes in chronological order, keeping my ideas organized, and going deeper then I would ordinarily do.

Keeping my quotes in chronological order was an easy fix. All had to do was put my quotes in chronological order. I struggled a little bit with keeping my ideas and thoughts organized but I think that after several rough drafts I was able to get where I wanted to. Going deeper within my poem actually came quite easily for me. Right away I could see a common concept the author was trying to get across and interpreted it right away.

I feel that I did a much better job on this paper than my other one. I feel this way since I now know the elements to put in this melting pot of literary genius. I also know I did a better job because it flows smoothly and has a lot of good points to it. Enjoy!

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