Hello group members. In my paragraph the only thing I changed was the second "chunk" because ya know I sorta mixed up the characters. I sorta need to spice up my thesis so anything you say would help. Thanks!
alright i'm sorry I didn't comment earlier, i waited till seven then kind of gave up on your post... but yeah, you should just try to get a better thesis sentace, besides that, your paragraph is pretty strong
alright i'm sorry I didn't comment earlier, i waited till seven then kind of gave up on your post...
ReplyDeletebut yeah, you should just try to get a better thesis sentace, besides that, your paragraph is pretty strong